Lealou @ Parkvale
I am a Year 6 student. I am in Totara Hub.
Sunday, August 14, 2016
Wednesday, June 29, 2016
princess and the pea
Here is my story about Princess and the Pea, but there is a twist in it. The bit that I'm proud of is that I put a lot of hard work in this and it came out perfect. I hope you like it. The part that I am working on is my punctuation because I sometimes I put my full stops in the wrong spot and also miss them too . Something that challenged me was trying to make it in my own words. Read on to find out what happens in the story.
Once upon a time there was a handsome young prince. That was looking for a Princess to marry.
One wet and cold day a beautiful girl knocked on the palis door. Clonk clonk clonk. The king rushed to open the door but the queen said “I'll get it”. A graceful looking girl waked into the pales. The prince immediately fall in love by a cress (curse) that the girl had put on him.
Soon the prince wished to marry her but little did they know that on the inside she was pure evil, all she wanted was the crown. when she got it she would slort (slaughter) them and make it ok like someone else did it.
Finally it was the wedding day. Knock knock knock. It was the king's adviser. He told the king about the girl and how she had put a spell on their son so the king ordered for the wedding to be cancelled and her to be killed.
A couple of years later the prince came home with a princess, but the king and queen had a trick to tell if she was a good princess or not. The queen put a pea under 1000 mattress and if she woke up with bruises she is a princess if not she’s just a girl.
“How did you sleep?” asked the queen. “Terrible, I have bruises all over and I found a pea under the Mattresses”.
she was a real princess and the price and the princess lived happily ever after.
Tuesday, June 28, 2016
matariki
Mātāriki is a special time of year when the maori tribes would have a feast and wait for the 7 stars of Matariki to rise into the night sky.
It is also the Maori New Year.
Some tribes sellerbrate the New Year at the full moon or the first part of when the moon peeks out.
My workshops where (were) the kites and the planting. Something that challenged me was kite making because we had to argue with manis so nobody got left out. When we had to weave the flax into the kite I got a little frustrated but I managed to carme down by taking a deep breath. The learning mails that I used were listening muscles and noticing muscles too by looking at other people's work.
Friday, June 3, 2016
The new boat
Last week we brought a boat I have been on it 3 times. I go out on the boat with Ian and Mum and my step sisters. We went out onto Clive River and then we down by Marine Parade.
looks like
- Colour silver.
- Made out of aluminiun.
- seats in the middle at the front & at the back.
- motor at the back of the boat.
It is so fun to go on our boat maybe you might get one some day. I like going on the boat because we get to go biscuiting. Biscuiting is when you lie down on a floaty and the boat drags you along and you skate along along the surface of the water and its loads of fun. Once we bounced up so high that it turned upside down.
I was nervis but I got youst (used) to it. we sped over the sea and down to the fishing spot and started to fish but we got nothing.
I was nervis but I got youst (used) to it. we sped over the sea and down to the fishing spot and started to fish but we got nothing.
Thursday, June 2, 2016
Maths
We designed our dream class room on a piece of paper like this.
That is my plan for the class. I am proud of this because I have don my best with
my adding. We had to find out what the area is. We had to add up all the squares to find out the area.
The strategy I used was splitting the numbers to add them like 9x 13 as 9x10=90 then 9x3=27 then 90+27 = 117.
Thursday, May 12, 2016
I am poem
My I am poem is about me and my life. So I am going to shear(share) it with you here it is.
I am a dreamer
I wonder if I will achieve my international licence
I hear the rain fall
I see the good in everyone
I want to be a fantastic friend to lots of people
I am a risk taker
I pretend that I am sleeping at night
I feel good for people when they reach their goals
I touch the thin air
I worry that people think I’m crazy
I cry happy tears for people
I am a dreamer
I understand life
I say nice things
I dream of what might happen in the future
I try my hardest at my work
I hope that I reach my goals
I am a dreamer
I hope you like it, I do. The bit I'm proud of is I worked so hard on this and it is great because I shared my feelings. The sentence I like is I hope I reach my goals. The thing that is special about this is that I spent a lot of time on this so it is perfect. 💎
Friday, April 15, 2016
Writing
For my writing goals I am doing punctuation so I can get better at my full stops,explanation marks and more.
Punctuation is a writers toll(tool) for the reader to know how to read the story.
Some thing that challenged me is speech marks because I never get them in the right place and I forget to use them but anyway here is my story.
Punctuation is a writers toll(tool) for the reader to know how to read the story.
Some thing that challenged me is speech marks because I never get them in the right place and I forget to use them but anyway here is my story.
Crunch crunch crunch brr. A wave of frost pored over me. I heard a yelp. It came from the pond. a teardrop rolled down my face and hit the white icy grass. In the distance a big slobbery and fury animal was roaming down the street. slowly I walked towards it. It had golden fur and it had blood dripping down the dog's mouth it had eaten something fury. It was a golden pitbull. That night I could not sleep I was thinking about the baby rabbits that I hid in the big hollow tree outside my house.
The next day I went to the big hollow tree and palled out the baby rabbits and haled them up in my hands.
“Mum mum” “what” “can we keep the rabbits” “ok” mum got me a cage and we sat on the bed watching the baby rabbits sleep. “Thanks for diner it was delicious. Plod plod plod I slowly walked down the hallway. Creek I slowly opened the door there they were staring at me as if they were waiting for me.
My other goal is adding detail. We use detail so the reader gets a pitcher in there head of what is going on in the story. I am proud they I tried to put detail in my story. Here are some example of where I have added in detail;
a teardrop rolled down my face and hit the white icy grass.
big hollow tree.
In the distance a big slobbery and fury animal was roaming down the street.
the best part of my writing is Plod plod plod I slowly walked down the hallway.
a teardrop rolled down my face and hit the white icy grass.
big hollow tree.
In the distance a big slobbery and fury animal was roaming down the street.
the best part of my writing is Plod plod plod I slowly walked down the hallway.
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